Lorelei – 100 words, audio

Lorelei called. Her voice nagged incessantly, a wavering and haunting sound that lingered. Always present beneath my consciousness, but in my dreams it became urgent. On the third day I relented and answered.

She sat on the lichen-covered rock, hair draping like a curtain. It floated on the water’s surface making it difficult to tell where water ended and naiad began – perhaps she was both one and same.

“You are a daughter of the earth, why continue this resistance?”

I sighed. “I cannot give what you want of me.”

She smiled. “It is always choice. The time is near. Choose.”

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on February 17, 2012 at 4:31 am | Reply 100-words #FlashFriday Whoo-hooo! Go #Fictioneers! « Madison Woods

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on February 17, 2012 at 4:41 am | Reply Ask Ulysses « ironwoodwind

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on February 17, 2012 at 4:50 am | Reply Douglas MacIlroy

Dear Madison,

I loved your story and, of course, demand to know what choice must be made. Your worlds are always so perfectly rendered, each brush stroke illuminating the scene so that it springs to life in our mind’s eye. I can’t wait to buy your books. Happy days ahead.

(The MPG file went into a permanent fit of …buffering. No sound and fury forthcoming. could be my computer up herer on the summit. hard to say. good luck with that.)

Aloha,

Doug

Here’s the link to my world. A bit of work is required of my readers this week, but might prove worth the effort.

http://ironwoodwind.wordpress.com/2012/02/17/ask-ulysses/
- on February 17, 2012 at 6:23 am | Reply Madison Woods
  
  Thanks Doug. I plan to have the first book finished by end of this summer Thanks for the feedback on the audio file, too. I’ve made a change to it, maybe it’ll work now.
  
  I have time for reading one story and yours is first in line. When I get more time later today, I’ll read some more. Off now to read and then to the task list for the day…
on February 17, 2012 at 4:58 am | Reply niiko47

I like the mystery present here, though I’ll admit that some of the mystery for me is that I don’t fully understand the situation!
Though perhaps that’s part of what makes it such an engaging piece of flash fiction.

I like the idea of the audio file, though it wouldn’t get past ‘buffering’ for me. However, using Realplayer I managed to download the file and give it a listen.

Here’s a link to mine (on my freshly-created WordPress blog, for ease of access):
http://garybaileywriting.wordpress.com/2012/02/17/fridayfictioneers-in-the-water/
- on February 17, 2012 at 6:28 am | Reply Madison Woods
  
  Thanks for the feedback niiko47, I’ll try to fix that audio file. It’s so hard to tell a complete story in 100 words, so mine are usually just snippets of larger tales. I’ve seen some of the fictioneers pull it off though. Heading your way next!
on February 17, 2012 at 4:59 am | Reply Quill Shiv

Oh, Madison! This is WONDERFUL! I couldn’t get the audio to work, however. But the story itself is just brilliant. And you certainly know your subject very well! <3

This is my link for the week: http://quillshiv.wordpress.com/2012/02/17/reading-tree-leaves/
- on February 17, 2012 at 9:42 am | Reply Madison Woods
  
  I think I fixed the audio now, but thanks for letting me know it didn’t work. I made an audio for last week’s too (retroactively), but I’ll bet it doesn’t open either.
  
  Glad you liked the story! Lorelei is a character in Symbiosis, the wip I’m trying to have finished for pitching at Chicon at the end of summer.
on February 17, 2012 at 5:26 am | Reply TheOthers1

Neat concept. Like a siren? No, wait. I had to look up naiad to get it. You said a lot with so few words. I’ll have to see if I can hear you when I’m on the computer later.

I found in participating that it’s really difficult to write something in 100 words and have it say what you want. Here’s my link: http://unduecreativity.wordpress.com/2012/02/17/skipping-stones

The site is mature as a warning to weary reader.
- on February 17, 2012 at 9:53 am | Reply Madison Woods
  
  Haha, yes sometimes it’s very difficult for me to get my point across in 100 words and often I fail miserably. But that’s the challenge of it
  
  Heading your way next.
on February 17, 2012 at 5:35 am | Reply ‘The Final Step’ – A 100 Word Story | Short Stories

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on February 17, 2012 at 5:39 am | Reply Mike

A lovely, almost melodic story Madison.
The intrigue comes in the final word – ‘Choose’
No wonder these very short stories sometimes go under the heading of ‘Hint Fiction’ – certainly a hint of lots to come in yours.

Here’s mine –
http://mjshorts.wordpress.com/2012/02/17/the-final-step-a-100-word-story/
- on February 17, 2012 at 10:02 am | Reply Madison Woods
  
  Yes, and a lot of mine are just snippets of much larger pictures so they *are* just hints. Heading your way next
on February 17, 2012 at 5:51 am | Reply Jan Morrill

Madison, I think that’s one of the most beautiful and haunting pieces I’ve seen you write. I love it.

I’m afraid I”m going to have to miss out on all the fun this week. Too much to do with the OWL meeting, then I’m straight off to Santa Fe, where I doubt I’ll have internet. Will miss you all and your fantastic flashes! See you next week!
- on February 17, 2012 at 10:10 am | Reply Madison Woods
  
  I’m going to be driving out very early tomorrow morning for the OWL meeting, since I didn’t get away to stay overnight. I love Santa Fe but have only passed through and didn’t get to stop. Have fun! Thanks for reading
- on February 17, 2012 at 11:47 am | Reply The Lime
  
  Oh! We’ll miss you Jan! (Also… I agree about beautiful and haunting — seriously).
on February 17, 2012 at 6:04 am | Reply The quest « Pen 'n' Tonic

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on February 17, 2012 at 6:08 am | Reply Caerlynn Nash

I like your story. There could definitely be a longer piece here.

My story is “The quest” (http://wp.me/p1WuR1-vw). Critiques always welcome. Enjoy.
- on February 17, 2012 at 10:14 am | Reply Madison Woods
  
  Thanks! Heading your way next
on February 17, 2012 at 6:22 am | Reply Charles Oyeleke Williams

Hey, I am the new guy from Africa, I find this a grand metaphor…seeing the photo prompt was wondering what story to make of this ‘spring pool’…and I must say your story is spot-on. Thanks. Here is what I could do with my head…had to extract it from an upcoming story about my national service year:

https://seewilliams.wordpress.com/2012/02/17/stuck-the-other-side-of-valour-100words-flash-fiction/
- on February 17, 2012 at 10:22 am | Reply Madison Woods
  
  Ha! You did jump right in with a story – good. Heading your way next. Glad you enjoyed mine
on February 17, 2012 at 6:24 am | Reply susielindau

I really like this one Madison! The haunted call of the sea, the vision of lichen draped hair and a choice to be made. I want more!!
Here is my haunting tale~
Slipped Away – 125 Word Flash Fiction http://wp.me/p1un5Q-uK
- on February 17, 2012 at 10:32 am | Reply Madison Woods
  
  Thanks Susie Heading your way next!
on February 17, 2012 at 6:38 am | Reply Joe Lerner

This is the most beautiful post I’ve seen of yours so far. It feels like the opening to a longer story. Which is OK. These 100-word challenges shouldn’t be limited to writing a complete story. That they can also prompt one to launch into a much longer story is not only OK but can sometimes lead to something great.

This week instead of one of my own 100-word stories I’d like to showcase a new furious fiction by Susan Sink. It can be found here: http://furiousfictions.com.
- on February 17, 2012 at 10:53 am | Reply Madison Woods
  
  Thanks, Joe, I’m glad you liked it I’m heading over to read Susan’s piece now.
on February 17, 2012 at 6:41 am | Reply Joe Lerner

I should add that Susan Sink’s piece is a short-short TRUE story.
on February 17, 2012 at 7:13 am | Reply unspywriter

Here’s my offering for today, and I’m looking forward to reading my weekly fix of Friday Fictioneers’ flash fiction.

http://mymusings-maggie.blogspot.com/2012/02/friday-flash-fiction.html
- on February 17, 2012 at 10:57 am | Reply Madison Woods
  
  Thanks for joining us today, heading your way in a few minutes
on February 17, 2012 at 7:14 am | Reply Robin Hawke

I wanted to apologize for not visiting with everyone last week. So before I throw 100 more words down, I’m going to try and cram some time catching up…at least before next Friday. Humbly, Robin
- on February 17, 2012 at 11:15 am | Reply Madison Woods
  
  I’ll be watching for you K.D.’s been scarce lately too, lots of projects going on.
- on February 18, 2012 at 2:23 am | Reply Douglas MacIlroy
  
  Dear Robin,
  
  I’m in the same boat with you. I’ll keep bailing and watch out for you.
  
  Aloha,
  
  Doug
  
  http://ironwoodwind.wordpress.com/2012/02/17/ask-ulysses/
on February 17, 2012 at 7:19 am | Reply Russell

Beautiful piece. It left me thirsty for more.

I’m working on the Beast today (Connie’s building), don’t know how many I’ll get to read, but will hit as many as I can.

here’s mine http://russellgayer.blogspot.com/
- on February 17, 2012 at 10:02 am | Reply parul
  
  Hi Russel,
  
  I am unable to comment on your blog. Here is what I was trying to say there:
  “A lot of people have gone down the memory lane with this prompt!
  But each one in their own unique and different styles…
  Very different from your usual writings… but equally good!”
- on February 17, 2012 at 11:22 am | Reply Madison Woods
  
  It’s refusing to accept my comment on your site so here’s what it was: I loved the rural, Ozarky feel too, but I am so glad *this* grandma isn’t having to wash diapers in the creek! I liked the way you drew comparisons between the rustic rock and grandma.
on February 17, 2012 at 7:24 am | Reply Flash Friday: Alive « write tuit

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on February 17, 2012 at 7:29 am | Reply Carlos Repuesto de la Tabla

Hi Madison,
I loved most not being able to tell where the water ended and the naiad began – very sublime bit of writing. And the mystery of choosing, which I read as the choice between environmental awareness and technological progress. But that’s just me.
Here’s mine:
http://repuestodelatabla.wordpress.com/2012/02/17/friday-fiction-100-word-story-12-gravestone/
- on February 17, 2012 at 7:41 pm | Reply Madison Woods
  
  That was my favorite part, too Thanks! Headed your way…
on February 17, 2012 at 7:37 am | Reply unspywriter

Nice job on the audio version of the story. I could “see” the story so well listening to it. I hope you do it again.
- on February 17, 2012 at 7:49 pm | Reply Madison Woods
  
  Thanks! I’m glad you listened and enjoyed it. I plan to do this for everything until I am totally comfortable hearing myself talk. Hahaha, eventually maybe someone will have to tell me to be quiet. And I will be once I get the pitching nailed.
on February 17, 2012 at 7:43 am | Reply andyfloodwritersblog

I loved this piece. Perfect atmosphere and gives a wonderful sense of those worlds just at the edge of the mundane. I particularly enjoyed your handling of the naiad. I would sincerely like to read more of this. Now I want to visit the location in the photo!
Here’s my story:

http://andyfloodwritersblog.wordpress.com/2012/02/17/the-summoning/
- on February 17, 2012 at 7:45 am | Reply andyfloodwritersblog
  
  Oops, forgot to mention, the audio file opened fine in a new tab, played with Quicktime plugin with Firefox browser. Sounds good Very brave of you.
  - on February 17, 2012 at 7:54 pm | Reply Madison Woods
    
    Thanks for that feedback. It’s part of a larger plan to get over a fear of public speaking. Haha, figured I’d wade in slowly.
- on February 17, 2012 at 7:53 pm | Reply Madison Woods
  
  Thanks – Lorelei is one of my favorite characters. Haha, the photo is at the creek below the house where I live. It’s in a great location for meditation – when I can make the dogs leave me alone.
on February 17, 2012 at 7:57 am | Reply Jeannie

I really like how you’ve added audio to your stories! And the story, was good!!
- on February 17, 2012 at 8:21 pm | Reply Madison Woods
  
  Thanks Jeannie I’m enjoying doing the audio far more than I thought I would, lol.
on February 17, 2012 at 7:59 am | Reply Wakefield Mahon

So many many melancholy stories! Here is my addition to the weeping pot.

http://www.wakefieldmahon.com/1/post/2012/02/down-by-the-river-friday-fictioneers.html
- on February 17, 2012 at 1:35 pm | Reply Wakefield Mahon
  
  BTW I loved your lush description and promise of an epic story to come.
- on February 17, 2012 at 8:25 pm | Reply Madison Woods
  
  Thanks Wakefield I’m heading your way next, but first I have to take a break, LOL. Lots of stories today, and now it’s tonight already!
on February 17, 2012 at 8:00 am | Reply Friday Fiction #13 | elmowrites

[...] Thanks to Madison Woods, as ever, for a challenging picture inspriation this week. Please do take a look at the over stories linked in the comments section of her blog. http://madisonwoods.wordpress.com/flash-fiction/lorelei-100-words-audio/ [...]
on February 17, 2012 at 8:02 am | Reply #Friday Fictioneers – Stone, Stream and Leaves « Craig Towsley

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on February 17, 2012 at 8:04 am | Reply Craig Towsley

Morning everyone,

Madison, there is some kind of magic haze surrounding your story this morning. It almost seems like we are looking at the reflection of a narrative, if that makes any sense. Enchanting.

Here’s mine: http://cleveroldowl.wordpress.com/2012/02/16/friday-fictioneers-stone-stream-and-leaves/

We,re heading out to the cottage for the weekend, so I,ll get to reading and commenting early next week.

Enjoy yourselves.
on February 17, 2012 at 8:05 am | Reply elmowrites

Hi Madison! Your description of Lorelei was stunning and I enjoyed the mystery in your story – what does she want from the narrator? If I would change anything I would just add the extra words to make her language more natural. I don’t know if this was a word count thing or a deliberate ‘language’ choice, but I found it a bit strange, and in such a beautifully flowing piece, slightly disruptive.

Here’s mine:
http://elmowrites.wordpress.com/2012/02/17/friday-fiction-13/
There’s even a poll for people to join in the conversation!

Off to read everyone else’s now…
- on February 18, 2012 at 7:59 pm | Reply Madison Woods
  
  Thanks Elmo. I think I will give the mc a more natural voice, but the Lorelei has a very formal speech. I appreciate that suggestion. These characters interact in another story of mine so that’s definitely something I’ll want to address.
on February 17, 2012 at 8:10 am | Reply Judee

Lovely piece, Madison, intriguing and flowing nicely. I like the nagging at the beginning, because the end left me with a nagging of “Choose what?” I think you sometimes like to leave us wondering, which is something I do enjoy in these short snippets – they leave the imagination open to fly.

Your audio worked fine for me on WMP, but it’s an mp4, and I had previously had to download a codec for the player for that format. Otherwise, i think it’s quicktime. It’s a nice idea, putting it in audio – I listen to a lot of audiobooks to give my eyes a rest.

I know what you mean about needing practice speaking – sometimes I feel I speak so seldom my voice gets rusty! Maybe I will try this at some point, if I can figure out how.

Sorry to ramble – here is my piece, with one small edit at the advice of a kind observer:
http://writetuit.wordpress.com/2012/02/17/flash-friday-alive/
- on February 18, 2012 at 8:09 pm | Reply Madison Woods
  
  Hi Judee, glad you enjoyed the story, and thanks for that feedback on the audio file .
  
  Heading over to your blog now.
on February 17, 2012 at 8:18 am | Reply Flash Friday : Simple Pleasures « Postcard Fiction

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on February 17, 2012 at 8:18 am | Reply Janet

Madison, I love the way the “choice” was left unknown and up to the imagination of the reader. I haven’t had a chance to try out the audio file but will get to it by the end of the day.

Here’s the link to mine, 50 words as usual:

http://postcardfiction.com/2012/02/17/flash-friday-simple-pleasures/
- on February 18, 2012 at 8:13 pm | Reply Madison Woods
  
  Heading your way next Janet, and then I’m heading to bed. It’s been a long day here, but tomorrow I’ll be moving through the rest of the stories.
on February 17, 2012 at 8:32 am | Reply Carlos Repuesto de la Tabla

I didn’t see the audio file the first time, but it worked fine when I did notice it. Very interesting to hear the voice you have in your head when writing, it adds to the understanding of the writing. And the story seemed much longer when read; I guess when I’m reading it, it flashes by. So, a good experiment, though I remain tied to the words on a page. Thanks for that!
BTW, the more I reread your story, the more I like it – one of your very best.
- on February 19, 2012 at 10:05 am | Reply Madison Woods
  
  I don’t think audio could ever replace words read on a page. When I’m driving, though, I think I’d like to listen to audio books. Thanks for the feedback, Carlos.
on February 17, 2012 at 8:42 am | Reply V. L. Gregory-Pohlenz

Cool idea–I love the audio addition. As always, it’s a story that leaves you with a desire for more! Well done! Mine is at http://vsta.pr/zMx9VT.
- on February 19, 2012 at 4:24 pm | Reply Madison Woods
  
  Thanks, V.L. I’m glad you liked the audio too. Heading your way!
on February 17, 2012 at 8:44 am | Reply Lindaura Glamoura

Interesting experiment. I prefer to read the story though, but like you say, it is good experience and, like our flash fiction writing, the more we do it, the better we get.
Unlike Carlos, I do not feel that this is one of your best. But Carlos already made me rewrite mine, so my first attempt was definitely not one of my best.
Here is my second attempt:
http://fictionvictimtoo.blogspot.com

yours,
Lindaura
- on February 19, 2012 at 4:26 pm | Reply Madison Woods
  
  I don’t think listening to a story can replace the experience I get from reading it. But I am enjoying making the audios and think there’s a niche for them out there. Plus it is helping me become less self-conscious.
  
  Thanks for your feedback – I think I went to yours already but forgot to comment here. Now I can’t remember if I left a comment at yours either!
on February 17, 2012 at 8:47 am | Reply Siobhan Muir

Hi Madison,

I really liked your story and its setup. I liked that she resisted until the last moment when a choice was demanded of her. Nicely done.

Here’s mine: http://siobhanmuir.blogspot.com/2012/02/just-right-guy-100words-for.html

As always, nothing explicit despite the warning.

Siobhan
- on February 19, 2012 at 4:28 pm | Reply Madison Woods
  
  Thanks Siobhan Heading your way next!
on February 17, 2012 at 8:51 am | Reply parul

This is nice! Has a magical, mystical feel to it!
I wrote mine before there was a place to comment the link here… so here it is!
http://faitaccompli.wordpress.com/2012/02/17/moments-gone-and-past/
- on February 17, 2012 at 9:19 am | Reply parul
  
  Forgot to mention… The audio is pretty good too Madison! Great idea!
- on February 19, 2012 at 4:42 pm | Reply Madison Woods
  
  Thank you – I’m glad you could feel the magical aura because that was my intention.
on February 17, 2012 at 9:33 am | Reply bridgesareforburning

Very innovative to incude the audio file. It played perfectly. I’ve had thoughts of creating a novel that would be multi-media, including audio, photos and video. The story is fascinating, and though you never use the word mermaid, I knew within the first few words. Another nice trip into the nether world of your wild imagination.
Here’s mine: bridgesareforburning.wordpress.com/
- on February 19, 2012 at 4:44 pm | Reply Madison Woods
  
  Thanks, Ron. Your multimedia idea sounds intriguing! Heading your way now.
on February 17, 2012 at 9:49 am | Reply Millie

Love the story and the audio! I want to know what the choice is. Here is the link to mine. http://avscott.wordpress.com/fiction/the-enchanted-tales-of-iveria-100-words/
on February 17, 2012 at 10:37 am | Reply teschoenborn

Wonderful, smooth, melodic, the 100 words flowed smoothly while still managing to suck me. I loved it.

Here’s the link to mine http://teschoenborn.com/
on February 17, 2012 at 10:54 am | Reply loustar02

I love this story. Eerie, yet compelling. Leaves me wanting to know more which is just perfect!

Here’s my link:

http://hugmore.wordpress.com/2012/02/17/home-a-friday-fictioneers-post/
on February 17, 2012 at 11:16 am | Reply miq

Madison, that was a beautiful and haunting story.

Here’s mine:
http://threedescriptors.wordpress.com/2012/02/17/flash-fiction-6/
- on February 19, 2012 at 5:31 pm | Reply Madison Woods
  
  I’m finally at your story link miq! Glad you enjoyed mine
on February 17, 2012 at 11:21 am | Reply writingbothsides

I always like the premise of a character facing a choice. You’ve given just enough information to intrigue me about that choice and, just as compelling, why the daughter of the earth feels she cannot give. Lots to explore. And once again, a great prompt.
Here’s mine: http://wp.me/s1Tjpv-passage
on February 17, 2012 at 11:31 am | Reply Imaginary Friend « The Color Lime

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on February 17, 2012 at 11:31 am | Reply #FridayFictioneers: In the Water « garybaileywriting

[...] This is part of a weekly Flash Fiction exercise put forth by Madison Woods, wherein a photo-prompt engages writers in creating a 100-word story based on an image such as the one above. You can read Madison’s story here: http://madisonwoods.wordpress.com/flash-fiction/lorelei-100-words-audio/ [...]
on February 17, 2012 at 11:32 am | Reply The Lime

Loving it as usual, Madison. Thanks for the prompt and the intriguing story. I’ll be doing the rounds later this evening but for now, here’s my link: http://thecolorlime.wordpress.com/2012/02/17/imaginary-friend/
on February 17, 2012 at 12:57 pm | Reply Beth Carter

I love these stories! Madison, yours was so unique and the audio was cool. Great idea/practice right before pitch season!

I’m off to a meeting and will comment on others tonight and this weekend. You can read mine here: http://banterwithbeth.blogspot.com/
- on February 19, 2012 at 9:35 pm | Reply Madison Woods
  
  Thanks Beth. Sorry to be so long in getting to your story, but we’ve had a lot of participants and I haven’t had much time! It was very nice to meet you in real-life yesterday
on February 17, 2012 at 1:32 pm | Reply Caely

Great touch of adding an audio of the story! I was curious when you said you’d add a little something to this week’s story, and it’s a great idea. Not sure if I will ever add my voice to my stories, though.

Here’s my contribution -> http://wp.me/puGD7-Fo
on February 17, 2012 at 2:32 pm | Reply #FridayFictioneers 02/17/12

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on February 17, 2012 at 2:44 pm | Reply Cara Michaels

Love it. I went the naiad route, too. Would love to hear the audio, but I’m sneaking this in at work, lol.

http://www.caramichaels.com/defiantlyliterate/2012/02/17/fridayfictioneers-021712/
- on February 19, 2012 at 9:48 pm | Reply Madison Woods
  
  LOL, I sneak so much of my reading and writing time in at work. One day it might be the ax for me if I don’t quit that. Heading your way finally.
on February 17, 2012 at 7:06 pm | Reply #FridayFictioneers #FlashFriday No. 4 « Random Inspiration

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on February 17, 2012 at 7:09 pm | Reply Stacey

Found it, LOL. (I had trouble getting here ) – here’s the link to mine – http://plowright.wordpress.com/2012/02/18/fridayfictioneers-flashfriday-no-4/
on February 17, 2012 at 8:15 pm | Reply Steven E.A.

Really great. Love the 2nd paragraph. Here’s mine: http://wp.me/sVRF7-struggle
on February 17, 2012 at 8:27 pm | Reply kbnelson

Love the imagery with the hair blending into the water! Lovely photo, too! Thanks for keeping us going, Madison -

I’m a bit late to the party, but here is my Friday (Night) Flash:

http://kbnelson.wordpress.com/2012/02/17/friday-flash-change-of-plans/
on February 18, 2012 at 3:48 am | Reply Sarah Paige Berling

I’m sorry I’m late with my entry! Here it is: http://sarahthestoryteller.wordpress.com

I loved your story. I like how you always end it on a surprise note

Love,
Sarah
- on February 19, 2012 at 10:09 pm | Reply Madison Woods
  
  Just now reaching your story Sarah.
on February 18, 2012 at 4:28 am | Reply Lora Mitchell

Hi Madison: Loved it. Just like you to leave us wanting more. Had to look up naiad. Here’s mine:

http://www.triplemoonstar.blogspot.com
- on February 20, 2012 at 10:21 am | Reply Madison Woods
  
  Running late on reading, Lora – just now getting to yours.
on February 18, 2012 at 7:14 pm | Reply LupusAnthropos

Well, better late than never. Here’s my story: http://wp.me/p24aJS-33

On my way to read the others now.
on February 18, 2012 at 8:51 pm | Reply LupusAnthropos

Nice setting, Madison. There is nothing else to which I could lichen it.
on February 19, 2012 at 2:15 am | Reply albertsass

Thank you.
on February 20, 2012 at 1:27 pm | Reply MaryAnn Kempher

Wish there had been more to read. Gonna go back and see if I missed some. I’m not an agent, but from what I saw==whoever said you need an IP lawyer vs an agent doesn’t know what they’re talking about. Feel like I must have missed something, if not than that’s a really odd thing to say.
- on February 20, 2012 at 1:37 pm | Reply Madison Woods
  
  Actually the comment about needing or not needing an agent has nothing to do with the post where the comment was left. That’s just where the comment is, so I directed for input to that post. and that comment I referred to is on the other post for Friday. This page has way too many comments for me to expect anyone to wade through looking for one comment in particular.
  
  I’d love to have input from agents on the topic of ‘what agents do’ to either dispel or confirm whether an author could really use one (not just me), or whether a lawyer can fill the same role.
  
  Thanks for commenting though, even if you aren’t an agent. Maybe if you know one, you can direct them to the link I tweeted earlier? Thanks
  
  Sent from my iPhone… You should have seen the typos I *did* catch!
on February 21, 2012 at 11:49 am | Reply Shirley McCann

I’m late, but had fun anyway. Here’s the link to mine
http://shirleymccann.blogspot.com/2012/02/friday-fictioneers-although-bit-late.html
- on February 21, 2012 at 1:49 pm | Reply Madison Woods
  
  Hi – glad to see you join us Shirley! When I get home tonight I’ll be able to read your story. Hope you join us again this week. I’ll be posting the photo in the morning and on Friday we’ll link to our stories from my story page for that day.
on February 22, 2012 at 6:15 pm | Reply Jake Kale

After that final line, I have a mental image of the Stay Puft Marshmallow Man wondering through the woods. Probably not what you intended, but fun nonetheless!

I like the audio, that was a nice touch.

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